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Donuts in an Empty Field is a contemporary, realistic fiction, and Young Adult novel about two best friends, the local food challenge, and letting go of anger.
This excerpt is from chapter one.
Vanessa is remembering her last fond memory of her father on the day he died.
“He wasn’t very good at eating donuts fast, but he made us laugh. He was covered in powdered sugar and it made me think of Christmas snow. I was proud and embarrassed for Dad at the same time. He was so fun, but he was always doing weird things.”
“I remember I could taste the powdered sugar. He was eating so fast that it was poofing everywhere. Bluster kept winding his leash under his legs as he watched us. Mom and I both laughed at Dad. He managed to swallow the first donut and was already stuffing the second one into his mouth.”
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Local young adult writer, Rachel Barnard, released the first novel in her young adult For the Love of Donuts series titled Donuts in an Empty Field with Life’s a Book Publishing, June 3rd, 2016 (AKA National Donut Day). Order your copy HERE.
Letting go of anger is life’s greatest challenge.
Vanessa hasn’t been the same since her father’s death. A hero until the end, he died saving a restaurant owner’s son from a burning building. Nessa blames the boy, but her best friend Nichole thinks it’s time to let go of the past. In a last ditch effort to break Nessa’s obsession, Nichole hopes signing up for the local food challenge will bust her out of her shell. A single choice defines the road ahead for Nessa. Doing the right thing isn’t easy, but living with the consequences of doing nothing might be worse.
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This excerpt shows that you truly deserve the title of ‘Doughnut Enthusiast.”
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Absolutely!
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A very everyday memory that takes on added poignancy given the circumstances. Excellent excerpt.
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Thanks! Sometimes I wish my childhood memories were this concrete and visual.
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This is why I usually avoid the powdery ones. Messy! Though they are delicious.
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Yeah, I’m not a big fan of powdered anything, but I love jelly filled.
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Great use of the senses in this emotional snippet! 😀
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Thanks!
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Good job of showing her last memory of her dad. Your love for donuts comes alive in this snippet, Rachel, and I’m glad you’re still sharing snippets with us!
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I do love donuts and so did Vanessa’s dad.
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That’s a really fun, special final memory to have of someone.
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It’s a nice concrete and specific memory and she has the dog Bluster as a memento as well.
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Very visual! I love the dog and the leash, the poof of sugar…wonderful.
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