Weekend Writing Warriors – Donuts in an Empty Field 8 #WeWriWa

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Donuts in an Empty Field is a contemporary, realistic fiction, and Young Adult novel about two best friends, the local food challenge, and letting go of anger.

This excerpt is from chapter one.

Vanessa and Nichole just found a mysterious list of six items with the first crossed. Vanessa’s date wrote the note before he died.

 

“It’s a bucket list,” Nichole explains.
“But why?”
“What do you mean, why? Most people have them,” Nichole says.
“He would have told me.”
Nichole gives me a funny look. “Seems like your dad though. I mean, c’mon, win a food challenge?”
“Yeah, it does kind of sound like him, but only one has been crossed out.” I frown, thinking of everything Dad never got a chance to accomplish.

 

What will Vanessa do with this piece of her dad – his unfinished bucket list?

 

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Letting go of anger is life’s greatest challenge.

Vanessa hasn’t been the same since her father’s death. A hero until the end, he died saving a restaurant owner’s son from a burning building. Nessa blames the boy, but her best friend Nichole thinks it’s time to let go of the past. In a last ditch effort to break Nessa’s obsession, Nichole hopes signing up for the local food challenge will bust her out of her shell. A single choice defines the road ahead for Nessa. Doing the right thing isn’t easy, but living with the consequences of doing nothing might be worse.

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All About the Donuts: Local Donut Shop Review – Donut Factory – Lynnwood, WA

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lynnwood, WA

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20815 67th Ave W, Lynnwood, WA 98036

(425) 361-7923

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Review criteria:

Most popular donut at the shop: Crobar
Signature shop donut: Crobar
Most popular US donut: glazed
2nd most popular US donut: Boston crème
Donut Hole: Not available

 

What I tried:

Glazed, Cake Donut, Boston Creme, Crobar

$6.20 total

 

What to expect:

I almost thought I was walking into a Krispy Kreme! This place is modern and very clean and open. The counter with all the donuts was so large that it was quite a bit taller than my head and I had to stand on tiptoe to see the donut employee behind the display case. Donut Factory has so many different choices! I had high expectations for the crobar, their most popular and shop specialty, but thought the glaze overpowered the croissant dough. I couldn’t taste anything under that powerfully sweet glaze. I would not order the crobar again. Donut Factory celebrated their 2-year anniversay May 7th, 2016.

 

My favorite:

Out of the three donut shops in Lynnwood, I thought Donut Factory had the best glazed donut! The glaze was not a milky crystallized glaze, but a sticky, dewy, sugary sheen that tasted phenomenal. The dough itself was slightly sweeter than normal and complemented the glaze on top.

All About the Donuts – Similar Books to Donuts in an Empty Field

Books Like Donuts in an Empty Field

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Dumplin’ by Julie Murphy
Contemporary YA/Realistic Fiction/Romance/High School/Family/Humor

Pitch: With starry Texas nights, red candy suckers, Dolly Parton songs, and a wildly unforgettable heroine—Dumplin’ is guaranteed to steal your heart.

What I loved about this book: The main character was a fat girl and she liked herself. She acknowledged when she didn’t have confidence and worked to get it back. The audiobook featured an amazing narrator and the Southern accent was mesmerizing. I loved how Willowdean talked. The conflicts were realistic and I feel like this book really showcased what it’s like to be a fat girl in a small Southern Texas town.

My favorite quote(s):
· “I think maybe it’s the things we don’t want to talk about that are the things people most want to hear.”
· “Good friendships are durable. They’re meant to survive the gaps and the growing pains.”
· “I think you gotta be who you want to be until you feel like you are whoever it is you’re trying to become. Sometimes half of doing something is pretending that you can.”
· “And I guess that’s when I decided being good at something didn’t mean you had to do it. Just ‘cause something’s easy doesn’t make it right.”
· “Lucy always said that the greatest friends have nothing and everything in common all at once. Y’all girls are different versions of the same story, she would say.”

How Dumplin’ is similar to Donuts in an Empty Field:
· The realistic breakdown of a friendship
· Main character figuring out what she wants and who she wants to be
· Small Southern town
· Main characters that have been their own worst enemy and held themselves back when others are ready to let them fly
· Sometimes the main character is confident and sometimes she puts up an enormous roadblock in her teenage life
· High school drama
· Body image


Stargirl by Jerry Spinelli
Realistic Fiction/YA/Middle Grade/Coming of Age

Pitch: In this story about the perils of popularity, the courage of nonconformity, and the thrill of first love, an eccentric student named Stargirl changes Mica High School forever.

What I loved about this book: The complexity in the simplicity of the story. Stargirl is that artistic girl we always wanted to be, that didn’t care about what others thought and was artistic to a fault. Stargirl isn’t perfect, though, or above being influenced by those around her.

My favorite quote(s):
· “I’m disappearing, Leo. Like Dootsie’s trick, except this is real. Who are you if you lose your favorite person? Can you lose your favorite person without losing yourself? I reach for Stargirl and she’s gone. I’m not me anymore.”

How Stargirl is similar to Donuts in an Empty Field:
· A main character that wants to be normal
· A main character that wants to be accepted as different
· Small town
· Capturing the school’s attention
· School drama and peer pressure


Kissing in America by Margo Rabb
Contemporary YA/Teen/Romance/Road Trip

Pitch: Acclaimed writer Margo Rabb’s Kissing in America is ‘a wonderful novel about friendship, love, travel, life, hope, poetry, intelligence, and the inner lives of girls.

What I loved about this book: The main character was dealing with grief and the unexpected death of her father just like Vanessa in Donuts. Grief caused almost every issue in the main character’s life and between her and her best friend.

My favorite quote(s):
· “Grief isn’t like a map you can follow. It’s not a simple route with a destination. Sometimes you loop back and find yourself in the exact same place you left.”

How Kissing in America is similar to Donuts in an Empty Field:
· Tragedy in the main character’s life
· Death of main character’s father and his absence in her life
· Dealing with grief
· Main character has a lot of internal musings just like Vanessa
· Main character has panic attacks and doesn’t always want to talk about it with others
· Facing fears
· Mother-daughter relationship
· The strain of grief on how characters relate and interact with one another
· The ultimate friendship break
· High school friend drama


Dreamland by Sarah Dessen
Contemporary YA/Romance/Realistic Fiction/Chick Lit/Abuse/Teen/High School

Pitch: After her sister left, Caitlin felt lost. Then she met Rogerson. When she’s with him, nothing seems real. But what happens when being with Rogerson becomes a larger problem than being without him?

What I loved about this book: This book showcases the floundering most teenagers go through as they try to figure out who they are and what they want. This book had a realistic ending. The tone of the book matched what was happening – a dreamlike state.

My favorite quote(s):
· “If you didn’t love him, this never would have happened. But you did. And accepting that love and everything that followed it is part of letting it go.”
· “And she was good to me: strong, fun, and fiercely loyal. And if I didn’t have many other friends because of her-most girls were intimidated by her looks, or thought she was too pushy, or just flat-out feared for their boyfriends-it never bothered me. I never missed having a wide, thick circle of girlfriends: Rina was more than enough. We were comfortable with each other’s flaws and weaknesses, so we stuck together and kept to ourselves.”

How Dreamland is similar to Donuts in an Empty Field:
· Main character figuring out what she wants and who she wants to be
· Living life without consciousness – letting life happen to her and not happening to life
· Being with one person makes her forget about her problems
· Main character coming to terms with who she is


The Boyfriend List: 15 Guys, 11 Shrink Appointments, 4 Ceramic Frogs and Me, Ruby Oliver (Ruby Oliver #1)by E. Lockhart
Contemporary YA/Chick Lit/Realistic Fiction/Humor

Pitch: Ruby Oliver is fifteen and is going through a tough time. Within a few days she goes from a reasonably popular and happy girl to a social pariah whose boyfriend has dumped her for her best friend, whose friends have turned away from her, and the whole school thinks she is a “slut”. And she is getting all the blame. So now she has panic attacks and a poncho-wearing shrink. And she just wants things to go back to normal.

What I loved about this book: This book is set in Seattle! I loved the unusual approach the author took for showing Ruby’s problems and what she was going to do about them. I also really like lists.

My favorite quote(s):
· “Sometimes it’s a good idea to think about what you want from a situation, and try to get it, rather than just blurt out the first thing that comes into your head.”
· “Other people apologize and don’t mean it “Sorry, but you shouldn’t have…” or “Sorry, but I just didn’t…” They apologize while telling you that they were right all along, which is the opposite of an actual apology.”
· “It really bothers me how in books it seems like the only two choices are perfection or self-hatred.”

How The Boyfriend List is similar to Donuts in an Empty Field:
· Main character with panic attacks
· Main character losing her friends
· Tension between main character and her parents
· Scenes at a shrink’s office


Saint Anything by Sarah Dessen
Contemporary YA/Coming of Age/Chick Lit/Teen/Family/Romance

Pitch: This is about Sydney, who’s always felt invisible, especially next to her older brother. He’s always the center of attention, even when he got in trouble. And then he did something really bad, and suddenly Sydney’s getting more attention. She changes schools, distances herself from her friends, and stumbles upon some new ones.

What I loved about this book: The quirky characters and the fascinating environment the main character was set in. I love how this book fully explored change and whether people can really change.

My favorite quote(s):
· “You only really fall apart in front of the people you know can piece you back together.”
· “That’s the thing, though. You always think you want to be noticed. Until you are.”
· “For most of us, once something was busted, it was game over. I would have loved to know how it felt, just once, to have something fall apart and see options instead of endings.”
· “In every friendship, at some point comes a test. Never before in my experience, however, had it involved food.”
· “There’s no shame in trying to make stuff work, is how I see it. It’s better than just accepting the broken.”
· “I would have loved to know how it felt, just once, to have something fall apart and see options instead of endings.”
· “Relationships evolve, just like people do. Just because you know someone doesn’t mean you know everything about them.”

How Saint Anything is similar to Donuts in an Empty Field:
· Main character living in the shadow of someone else
· Main character figuring out what she wants and who she wants to be
· A best friend who really knows the main character and makes her feel really seen
· Themes of self-discovery, family, and change
· Broken relationships


Speak by Laurie Halse Anderson
Contemporary YA/Realistic Fiction/Teen/High School/School/Coming of Age/Abuse/Drama

Pitch: A traumatic event near the end of the summer has a devastating effect on Melinda’s freshman year in high school.

What I loved about this book: This is one of my favorites books of all time and one of the best YA books I’ve ever read. The author says so much with very few words and those few words were so very powerful. The teen voice in this book was so realistic and interesting.

My favorite quote(s):
· “When people don’t express themselves, they die one piece at a time.”
· “I have survived. I am here. Confused, screwed up, but here. So, how can I find my way? Is there a chain saw of the soul, an ax I can take to my memories or fears?”

How Speak is similar to Donuts in an Empty Field:
· High school drama
· Traumatic event that shapes the way the main character does and views everything
· Sometimes withdrawn main character
· Powerful theme that doesn’t take away from the amazing story being told


The True Meaning of Cleavage by Mariah Fredericks.
Contemporary YA/Realistic Fiction/Teen/High School/School/Coming of Age/Abuse/Drama

Pitch: When Jess and Sari, best friends since seventh grade, begin their freshman year of high school and Sari becomes obsessed with a senior boy, Jess wonders if their friendship will survive.

What I loved about this book: The main character and her best friend were so unique and different, yet they were such good friends. This book showed high school through two very different perspectives, which I really appreciated.

My favorite quote(s):
· “But sometimes I wonder: Does everything in my life have to be about what Sari wants?

How The True Meaning of Cleavage is similar to Donuts in an Empty Field:
· High school drama
· Friends who are opposites but get along well
· Friends that drift apart and are rekindled
· Trying new things
· The importance of appearance
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Local young adult writer, Rachel Barnard, will release the first novel in her young adult For the Love of Donuts series titled Donuts in an Empty Field with Life’s a Book Publishing, June 3rd, 2016 (AKA National Donut Day). Order your copy HERE.

Letting go of anger is life’s greatest challenge.

Vanessa hasn’t been the same since her father’s death. A hero until the end, he died saving a restaurant owner’s son from a burning building. Nessa blames the boy, but her best friend Nichole thinks it’s time to let go of the past. In a last ditch effort to break Nessa’s obsession, Nichole hopes signing up for the local food challenge will bust her out of her shell. A single choice defines the road ahead for Nessa. Doing the right thing isn’t easy, but living with the consequences of doing nothing might be worse.

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Book Review: Illusive Echoes (The Greatest Sin Book 4) by Lee French & Erik Kort

Illusive Echoes (The Greatest Sin Book 4) by Lee French & Erik Kort

A Fantasy Novel published by Tangled Sky Press (06/28/16)

Summary:

“I do not require coddling.” He sighed and turned away from her. “You’re so difficult.” (Kindle Locations 2568-2569).

Chavali is tasked with finding the killer of her friend and recovering the cat statue he was supposed to deliver. Was Harris just a friend to Chavali? She will have to work out her feelings amidst the new mission that proves more complex than it at first seems.

Keywords:

Fantasy, Clan, Family, Loyalty, Prophesy, Seer, Close-Knit, Sacrifice, Strength, Evil, Friendship, Mystery, Thriller, Healing, Leadership, Illusions, Betrayal, Intrigue, Gangs, Connections

My Review:

Again and again in the Greatest Sin Series Lee French shows the reader an intriguing and wonderful character in Chavali. Chavali is wise, logical, skilled, stubborn, attuned to the nuances in human behavior, and just a little bit antisocial. She is a fascinating character.

The mystery in this fourth book, as in the previous three Greatest Sin books, was complex and multi-layered. I was not able to figure out all the twists and turns, but they kept me engaged in the story and the mystery.

Two characters were missing from most of this book. Harris showed up briefly only to be murdered and I really can’t wait to see more of him and his relationship with Chavali. Karias also had a minor role in this book and I really love his character and can’t wait to get more from him in future books as well. I’m waiting patiently for Colbi, Karias, and Chavali to have an in depth heart to heart.

Disclaimer: I was given a free copy of this story in exchange for my honest review.

This novel was published by Tangled Sky Press on June 28th, 2016 and is available on Amazon here.

 

TL;DR Star Rating: 4.50

 

Links for more information:

Lee French on Facebook

Lee French on Twitter

Weekend Writing Warriors – Donuts in an Empty Field 7#WeWriWa

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Here’s the link to the Weekend Writing Warriors central page, so you can visit all the participants sharing excerpts!

Donuts in an Empty Field is a contemporary, realistic fiction, and Young Adult novel about two best friends, the local food challenge, and letting go of anger.

This excerpt is from chapter one.

After last week when Vanessa first opens the room to her late father’s office, she is tasked with cleaning everything out and boxing everything up with her mom and her best friend, Nichole. Vanessa found a hidden piece of paper behind a photo on the wall, a last memento of her Dad.

 

I read through the scribbles and turn to Nichole in confusion. I show her the note.

July 22, 2002

  1. Get a dog.
  2. Win a food challenge.
  3. Shoot a gun.
  4. Ride a motorcycle.
  5. Skydive.
  6. Perform a kind deed without expecting anything in return.

 

Why is one of these items crossed off? What does this list mean? Tune in next week to find out.

 

Purchase the book HERE.

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Local young adult writer, Rachel Barnard, will release the first novel in her young adult For the Love of Donuts series titled Donuts in an Empty Field with Life’s a Book Publishing, June 3rd, 2016 (AKA National Donut Day). Order your copy HERE.

Letting go of anger is life’s greatest challenge.

Vanessa hasn’t been the same since her father’s death. A hero until the end, he died saving a restaurant owner’s son from a burning building. Nessa blames the boy, but her best friend Nichole thinks it’s time to let go of the past. In a last ditch effort to break Nessa’s obsession, Nichole hopes signing up for the local food challenge will bust her out of her shell. A single choice defines the road ahead for Nessa. Doing the right thing isn’t easy, but living with the consequences of doing nothing might be worse.

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Brain to Books and Indie Pride Day July 1

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Indie Pride Day is 1 July 2016! In celebration, Independent artists around the world have built a wave of sales, freebies, and giveaways all in celebration of the independent artist.

Here is what’s happening all over!
On 1 July 2016, Brain to Books is hosting an Author Showcase on Goodreads where more than one hundred authors are showcasing their work. The Brain to Books Book Blast is taking place at angelabchrysler.com/blog, which she’s turned into a carousel of authors and books. Simply scroll down the blog and review the displays! Blog Tours are happening on a number of blogs. On 2 & 3 July 2016, Patty Jansen is showcasing hundreds of books all on display for Indie Pride Day. All books on display by Patty Jansen are marked down to $0.99! And the Fire and Lies Release Party has pulled together two days of Fantasy and Science Fictions authors displaying their books for your enjoyment!

To attend any of this events, just scroll down and select the picture that will take you to your desired destination.

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Brain to Books Presents Rachel Barnard in the YA Genre thread at 3PM EST HERE

 

All about the Donuts – Donuts Aftermath! How sales channels/marketing/promotion worked

Percentage of sales from different outlets:

Ingramspark =42%
Amazon =24%
Createspace =4%
In person =14%
Sales events (MVD/Oddmall/release parties) =16%

 

Marketing prior to book release: Accounts for 10% of total sales (tracked with pre-order sales)

 

Marketing post book release: Accounts for 52% of total sales

 

 

Marketing going forward: Accounts for 38% of total sales

  • Ingramspark Third Place Books order = copies still available for purchase account for 38% of total sales
  • Weekend Writing Warriors
  • Newsletter
  • All About the Donuts
  • Local Donut Shop Reviews
  • Word of Mouth
  • Future sales events
    • Capital Indie Book Con
    • Oddmall Holiday Event

 

All About the Donuts Newsletter from May:

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Book Review: Charity for Nothing: The Virtues Book III by A.J. Downey

Charity for Nothing: The Virtues Book III by A.J. Downey

A Romance Novel published by Second Circle Press (06/13/16)

Summary:

Charity has been apart from her sisters Hope and Faith for some time, but now that she’s graduated with a nursing degree she joins them in Ft. Royal, Florida. As soon as Charity lays eyes on one of the Kraken, she can’t stay away. There’s something about Nothing that speaks to her, but is he too broken to be fixed by Charity?

Keywords:

Tall, Handsome, Nurse, Hurricane, Natural Disaster, Preparation, Helping, Cleanup, Sisters, Hopeless Cases, Romance, Motorcycle, Club, Loyalty, Family, POV Change, Sexual Content, Past Life, Moving On

My Review:

The plot in this book is a bit designed in the beginning, but the story takes over completely and the characters write their own story.

The love that the characters have and show for each other makes me want to be more romantic and loving in my own life. They are so in the moment and so awake in life to themselves, their surroundings, and their feelings that I want to be present in every moment too.

The phrase, larger than life, is so very true in this book and for the MC books by AJ Downey.

I love how Nothing doesn’t give up on the medical profession, that he scored highest on his re-certs, that he has it in his back pocket even if he’s not mentally ready to move on. Charity is as stubborn as they get and won’t take no for an answer, even when Nothing’s actions speak very loudly. In his head, Nothing isn’t as convinced that he can’t or won’t be with Charity. This is a whirlwind of ups and downs for Charity and Nothing. Will they end up together or will Nothing’s past keep him from moving forward?

This novel was published by Second Circle Press on June 13th, 2016 and is available on Amazon here.

TL;DR Star Rating: 4.00

Links for more information:

A.J. Downey’s Blog

Goodreads

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