Book Review: Wildest Dreams by Stefany Rattles

Wildest Dreams by Stefany Rattles

A Romance Novel published by Stefany Rattles (09/28/14)

 

Summary:

Alaina never went to college. She’s of average intelligence, but she’s given a chance at a career when she’s accepted at a law firm in Arkansas. She is a short brunette with hazel eyes and a penchant for engaged men. Alaina is excited to start her new job, but soon gets caught up in the man she crushed on in high school, a case involving a young Russian girl in the Witness Protection Program, and threats telling her to stay away from Rayden (the engaged man).

 

Keywords:

 Romance, Cheating Fiance, Female POV, Jealousy

 

My Review:

The first thing any reader will notice about Wildest Dreams is the well-crafted book cover that indicates the book is solidly a romance (between a man and a woman) and that the eBook has not been formatted. The author, it would seem, has forgotten to justify her paragraphs to indent for dialogue and new paragraphs. This makes for a book that is physically difficult to read, unless she was continuing in the book’s stream of consciousness writing style. Clever or forgetful, who knows?

What can only be deemed an oversight is the abundance of obvious grammatical errors, where the incorrect word is used or spelled wrong, commas are skipped over, and possessives are given oddly spaced apostrophes. The tenses used also skip from present to past without missing a beat (still could be from stream of consciousness). Many of the sentences are short and choppy and a lot of the action is told to us by the author/narrator Alaina.

I adore the character names used, Alaina and Rayden being my favorites, but I couldn’t get into the romance of the story. To me, it was unbelievable, unrealistic and became dull and lifeless. Why does Alaina even appeal to these career-men? We are not told much about her outside of her fascination for Rayden and her involvement in the present action with her job and the Russian girl.

It is difficult to pull off a romance between an engaged man and another woman without making the characters unlikeable and Rattles was not able to balance this morally-gray area to my satisfaction as a reader. Rayden is ready to leave it all behind for Alaina, his job and his fiancé and his parents’ approval, but why? It also makes him less appealing as the lead man and less appealing professionally. He lost my sympathy when he actively pursued another woman when he was in a committed relationship (no matter what the terms). I was also very perturbed when he took advantage of Alaina when she was drunk and neither the characters nor the author seem fazed by this act of rape.

I was impressed when Rattles was able to dish out an epilogue that was able to wrap up the main story without giving away the entire happily ever after. I was also delighted with each new character’s introduction and Rattles’ instant description of what they looked like and a quick personality description.

I received a free copy of this book for an honest, non-reciprocal review.

This novel was published by Stefany Rattles September 28, 20104 and is available on Amazon here.

 

TLDR Star Rating: 2.50

 

Links for more information:

Stefany Rattles’ Website

Goodreads Profile

Book Review: Deny the Moon (Wolfblooded Book 1) by Melissa A Graham

Deny the Moon (Wolfblooded Book 1) by Melissa A Graham

A Paranormal Drama Novel published by Melissa A. Graham (11/28/14)

 

Summary:

 Harley “Harls” Rayne is just an average girl in an average town in an average family, except for the fact that her parents favor her younger daughter Lorelei. This favoritism spurs Harley to run off with the bad boy biker to become his bike b***h (aka the person who rides behind him on his Harley). But Frank isn’t all that she thought he was and his violent behavior and a culminating incident becomes the final straw for her to steal his bike and run away again. She thinks she’s safe with her new life and new job and new friends, until it all comes crashing down around her once more.

 

Keywords:

 Bikers, gang, packs, werewolves, female protagonist, strippers, abusive relationships

 

My Review:

I went through a sequence of liking and disliking this book. At first I loved it, there was tension from the very first page and the characters were very real. The story was alive from paragraph one and the inciting incident went off without a hitch. Harley turned her life upside down. Then I started to get bogged down in grammatical errors and the gruesome violence that the author described. I was not prepared for the horrific violence, but kudos to the author for bringing out such a strong emotional reaction in me, it is a telltale sign of a good writer, just not what I was expecting in a paranormal young adult story. I was further disgusted by the behavior of Frank and the relationship between Harley and Frank. It was an abusive relationship described in a way to make my toes curl and my hair stand on end, but was interlaced with these extremely steamy descriptions. Graham was putting me through emotional loops, with ups and downs and extremes in between. Be warned fair readers of the violence, abuse, and foul language in this book. Graham depicts the not-so-nice aspects of relationships and the gruesome results of foul play, but she does it in a hypnotizing way that makes you turn the pages with shaking fingers.

I despised Frank so much he made my stomach curdle. He is cold-blooded and cold-shoulders and the definition of the opposite of a gentleman. But he has a soft spot for Harley and it’s hard to hate him too much because he has that undeniably redeeming quality of wanting to protect her (from everybody but himself at least). He is domineering and possessive with a pack-like animalistic quality. He is raw and as Harley sees him: extremely and ruggedly attractive.

Harley is also a hard character to like. She put herself into the bad situation. Don’t girls know that the bad boys are usually bad news? Her most redeeming moments are when she is being protective of her best friend Liz. Harley surprised me with her gumption and ability to leave the situation when it crossed the line. When at first I didn’t like her because she couldn’t take action and kept staying in the abusive relationship, she showed her true strength when she up and left and started over with a confidence not many women would have after her experiences.

This book pushes the boundaries of paranormal with its down to earth grittiness and would appeal to those who enjoy a gritty paranormal story with violence, werewolves, or a female protagonist.

This novel was published by Melissa A. Graham November 28th, 2014 and is available on Amazon here.

 

TL;DR Star Rating: 3.25

 

Links for more information:

Melissa A Graham’s Website

Goodreads Profile

Twitter

Miscellaneous Mondays: My Favorite Indie Authors 2/5 – Ksenia Anske

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Here’s the story of how I met Ksenia Anske….

Remember last week when I told you how I met Hugh Howey? The story of how I met Ksenia starts out the same way because… I met her at the Hugh Howey meetup! Part of the reason I love Ksenia so much as an author is because I love her as a person. If you met her in real life you would instantly fall in love with her too. She is dynamic and charming and loud. She gives out hugs and tells you that you can kiss her hand. She is playful and doesn’t take herself too seriously. She has the easy manner you might associate with a movie star and not a writer. She is the writer that writers wish to be and boy can she promote herself! I was charmed when I met her and I’m still charmed today because I follow her on Facebook and her blog. She has a way with talking to her readers and her fans and she’s so entertaining.

Not only is she a great personality and writer in person, but also in her books. Not all of her novels are glitter and roses (one of them has roses) because she has lived a life. She brings so much to the table as a writer through her books and the sometimes hard lessons learned through them. Irkadura and Siren Suicides deal with real issues and when I read them I took away something ddifferent a perspective on suicide and hard times I don’t always get from the normal YA and fantasy that I usually read. Life is not always fun and games, but it can be described beautifully by authors like Ksenia Anske.

Ksenia Anske is on my list of Indie stars to watch out for because she is a wonderful writer with an easy to read and compelling writing style, is so charming, brings up the real issues in her books, and has a great relationship with her readers through both her social media and in person presence.

I’ve read every novel of Ksenia’s and am ready and waiting for her new works, especially the manuscript she’s currently editing/working on: Corners.

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Here’s what Ksenia says and another reason I love her as an author: “I believe that art is not about protecting it from being stolen, it’s about giving it away and inspiring others to create more art. All of my books (and drafts) you can download for FREE on my site indefinitely. You can also buy signed paperbacks or digital/paper copies on sites like Amazon. If you think my writing is worth your money and you want to support me, please buy my books or donate. It’s a pay-what-you-want idea. Any amount spells to me your love. It will enable me to give you more love in return, to write more books for you to read and share. XOXO.”

I’m so glad Ksenia is local and I’m able to see her now and then at events like her book reading and the Gifts for Geeks at the AFK Tavern.

Check back next Monday for the week’s Indie Author Rising Star 3/5

Gifts for Geeks and Rachel Barnard’s FREE ebook downloads TODAY

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Today only At One’s Beast and Wandering Imagination by Rachel Barnard are free for download on Amazon.

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Every girl and boy in the village of Frey fears the beast who lives in the forest. Ten years ago, the beast was formed from the town’s rage — and the evil that lurks inside all people in moments of weakness. Every year since, the townspeople have sacrificed one of their own to appease his anger. This year the sacrifice does not go as planned. A young man saves the chosen girl from fate. She is torn between doing her duty and untangling the identity of her savior and captor. The young man grew up with thoughts of revenge on the town that turned their backs on him, but when he is close to the girl, he is reminded of who he used to be. From once upon a time to happily ever after, the people of Frey will have to rally together to rid the town of evil once and for all, but in the process will they destroy everything that is good in their world?

 

Wandering Imagination… WanderingImagination

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Book Review: The Genesis Code: Lambda by Robert E. Parkin

The Genesis Code: Lambda by Robert E. Parkin

A Sci Fi/Fantasy Novel published by Robert E. Parkin (09/29/14)

 

Summary:

Lambda is the most sophisticated AI program, able to learn and grow, or is she? Zack was the one who found Lambda, the first to imprint on her, but is this more than just coincidence? Zack decides to stand by Lambda, for reasons he at first doesn’t disclose, which leads to his life and that of his pop star sister being in danger. As Zack falls for Lambda, he is more and more reminded of someone from three years ago, someone who changed his life, someone whose past is connected to Zack in more ways than anyone seems to realize.

In the fight for the Network’s continuation and the fight between those with access and those without, Zack and his family are caught in the middle of something greater than all of them, but they all seem to have a hand in it behind the others’ backs. And yet, it all goes back to a cruel abuse of power and the misuse of technology to hold back those who can’t keep up. A Great Divide.

 

Keywords:

Fantasy, Science Fiction, Love Story, AI, Economic Divide

 

My Review:

This novel has a long list of characters and introduces most of them from the beginning to slowly tie them together throughout continual action and excitement and reveal. The author excels at layering his plot and leaving breadcrumbs of backstory leading right up to the climax. It was difficult keeping up with the cast of characters until the latter half of the story. It was also difficult keeping track of allegiances and motivations and keeping them clear between the characters.

The action scenes (which comprise a large portion of the novel) are engaging and exciting and frequented by fantastically large weaponry. For a novel based on Earth, with humans and human-like characters, the weapons technology is a deviation from the norm and keeps the book fresh and different.

I started out liking the powerful AI Lambda, but when she was overcome little by little with human emotions and lost her power and her confidence I started to resent her. She devolved from a feared and beautiful AI to a distressed and distracted woman-like AI. However, Parkin does say that “she is a girl before she is a program.” (Location 5073). But I hoped she would remain like Zack’s initial perception, “A cyber maiden of death, clad in black. All he could think at that moment was just how alluring and terrifying she looked.” (Location 430-431).

Some final thoughts I had upon finishing the novel were as to what the world outside the Limit Zones looked like. What do people eat? How is their Network technology possible?

I was also a bit disappointed in the ending. It appears the novel ends in the middle of the climax and I prefer, even of the first book in a series, for it to be complete and with an end. Even with an overarching unresolved issue the smaller conflicts should be resolved.

On an end note I adore the cover in its vibrancy.

This novel was published by Robert E. Parkin September 29th, 2014 and is available on Amazon here.

 

TLDR Star Rating:3.25

 

Links for more information:

Goodreads

Facebook

Robert E. Parkin’s Website

Book Review: The Thousand Year Curse (The Curse Books #1) by Taylor Lavati

The Thousand Year Curse (The Curse Books #1) by Taylor Lavati

A YA Paranormal Novel published through CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform (08/12/13)

 

Summary:

Ryder has to overcome more than her real name Eurydice when she is tossed into the dog house of high school and tormented almost every day by her previous best friend. She feels alone and vulnerable and just wants to make herself disappear, but within the very first month of school the new boy makes her his object of affection. Not too soon after, a second new transfer student gets the hots for her and she gets stuck in a love triangle of mythic proportions.

 

Keywords:

 Paranormal, mythology, love, love-triangle, curse, high school, teen drama

 

My Review:

Integrating mythology into a romance story is a great idea, and Lavati starts out integrating the story of love and curse well into her present day character Ryder. Lavati gives the deepest of reasons for Olli and Ari (the two love interests) to be obsessed with Ryder, which gives the book more intrigue and more grounding.

Then Lavati goes paranormal. The story gets more myth and less reality all the while keeping the love triangle going strong. It is a story of highs and lows in each of Ryder’s relationship and Lavati keeps the reader wondering who this girl will end up with and who is best for her in the end, both according to the curse and according to how each of the boys’ feel about her.

I was entranced by Lavati’s beginning. She hooked me in with the story and the underdog character of Ryder who definitely has some great things coming for her. I was disappointed when Lavati abandoned the underdog altogether to give Ryder some unnecessary superpowers while she is learning to fend for herself in the ultimate battle of her soul. I didn’t think it was necessary for Ryder to have these great powers, but perhaps they will come into more play further in the series. I also thought the love triangle started to become too stereotypical, like that in Twilight, but I’m very glad the guys had a real reason behind their instant attraction.

One plot comment I would make is that the adult situations contained in chapter sixteen weren’t necessary for the story line and could have been left out.

Overall the author does quite well at involving a myth as a motivation and interweaving the past and present to make an epic of higher than normal proportions with greater consequences and greater possibilities. If romance, especially love triangles, and deepening paranormal leaps is your thing, then this could be the book for you.

I recommend this book for anyone who enjoys the steamy love triangle of Twighlight or integrating myths into a novel.

This novel was published through CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform August 12th, 2013 and is available on Amazon here.

 

TLDR Star Rating: 3.25

 

Links for more information:

Goodreads

Facebook

Taylor Lavati’s Website

Miscellaneous Mondays: My Favorite Indie Authors 1/5 – Hugh Howey

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Here’s the story of how I met Hugh Howey….

I had heard about him from various other readers/authors and I was intrigued. All I can recall hearing about him was that he wrote this awesome dystopian book. Bam! That got my attention. End of world disaster? Yeah, count me in. I’m referring to Wool (pictured above). I wanted to read the book and at the time I was only reading physical books (no e-books). I didn’t think too hard about actually putting the book into my library queue or buying the book until the pressure of all those other readers hailing Hugh Howey as some great genius cracked through to my TBR list. At the time I was also only purchasing books that were signed. For Hugh Howey’s Wool, though, I figured I could make an exception. I bought the book and shelved it immediately. I was busy, but I was growing to like the author more and more. Hugh Howey is my author idol. He interacts with his readers like a true role model and so I started to follow him through social media.

Then, bam! Again I was thrust into the world of Hugh Howey. He was coming to Seattle and was going to stop in at a local bar downtown to meet his fans. It was the day before, how many people could possibly show up on such short notice? I was intrigued. I could get my copy of Wool signed so that my collection of books wouldn’t contain any unsigned works. I was sold and the next day made off to somber Seattle to meet the man who was a self-published millionaire, with a success story like J.K. Rowling’s rise to fame: he had a great novel published at just the right time at the beginning of a new wave of reading to thrust him into the spotlight. Hugh is my hero.

I still hadn’t had a chance (or made a chance) to read Wool or any of his other works, but that wasn’t going to stop me from meeting such an entrepreneur. However, I did my research before I went. What had made Hugh such a remarkable shining example of an author rising through self-publishing to become rich AND famous? Part of it, I think, is due to him being at the forefront of self-publishing i.e. less competition and the fact that he had a breakout novel. Wool (when I finally got around to reading it) is phenomenal.

So I went to Seattle, met up with approximately fifty other adoring local fans and shyly made a grab for the famed Hugh Howey’s signature for my copy of Wool. At the event I met one of my other favorite Indie authors who makes it onto my Indie authors to watch. I didn’t mention to Hugh that I had not read the book, or any of his books. He is my idol in more ways than just the writing. He has a work ethic to admire and a business sense to watch out for. I also like to see what pictures he posts on facebook and read his blog posts about current author politics or self-publishing tidbits and statistics.

Hugh Howey, though he is already a star of self-publishing and the Indie author world, is on my list of Indie stars to watch out for because he is a wonderful writer, prolific, has a terrific work ethic, an acute business/marketing sense, and has a great relationship with his readers through both his social media and in person presence.

I’ll have to make some more time to read some more of his novels and the next ones on my list are Sand and I, Zombie.

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Another story: As soon as I got to the bar, I began to panic. It was fairly large and sprawling and I had no clue where Hugh was going to be. I was fashionably late and the bar was hopping. I walked timidly out of the doorway and into the left main area, sweating my nerves in a foreign place with so many strangers. My author anxiety and closet introverted nature hanging on my sleeves. I saw a large table with some boisterous people and marched up to one and asked if this was where Hugh Howey was. They assured me it was and brought me to an empty seat. I sat, still timid, and tried to spot Hugh. No offense to the man, but he is quite average looking. In a bar full of chattering people, I couldn’t spot him. I tried to pull up his picture, but he has one of those melt in a sea of people faces and I just couldn’t pull him out of the crowd. Embarrassed I asked one of my new seatmates if they could point him out as I didn’t really know what he looked like and probably couldn’t recognize him. They laughed off my insecurities and one nice lady said she’d snag him over for me as he hadn’t spent much time at the table anyway. She brought back several guys and pointed in their general direction for Hugh. I turned to the man she pointed out about to speak when the guy in the middle spoke first. Whoops, good thing I held my tongue because not only could I not recognize Hugh Howey in a crowd, I couldn’t even recognize him between three guys. He wasn’t the one I had identified and thought the lady pointed out, but the guy in the middle. Embarrassment narrowly averted.

I hope someday to have the chance to meet Hugh again and maybe even get in a brief chat.

Check back next Monday for the week’s Indie Author Rising Star 2/5