Book Review: Wildseed Witch by Marti Dumas

Wildseed Witch by Marti Dumas

A Middle-Grade Fantasy Novel published by Amulet Books (05/10/22)


Hasani is all about growing her makeup YouTube channel this summer and getting to 100 followers. When an emotional outburst sets a bridge covered in vines, she’ll have to change her summer plans. She’s offered a scholarship to a charm school for witches. And Hasani is a wildseed witch. It’s a whirlwind for her as they get her ready to go to this school and her arrival at Les Belles Demoiselles is just as chaotic. Hasani just learned she was a witch and doesn’t know how to control her powers, while most of the other girls have known they were witches their whole lives.


Magic, Witches, School, Charm School, Old-Money, Control, YouTube, Influencer, Makeup, Power, Influence, Family, Friendship, Bullying

My Review:

After arriving at the charm school, this book continually challenged my assumptions of what magic can be. Just like Hasani, I had to learn what magic looks like and how it can be controlled at Les Belles Demoiselles. And just like Hasani and her mother, I did not know how to pronounce this charm school. We both had a lot to learn! The author keeps the reader in the dark as much as Hasani is in the dark about what to do, where to go, how to behave, what’s right, what’s wrong, and most everything else! I felt her frustration and confusion. And she didn’t even know where the bathroom was. Hasani is clueless. The other girls think her ignorant and wild. The teachers are reserving judgment, mostly. I would be crying myself to sleep every night in this situation.

There are some big lessons to learn from reading this book about controlling emotions and learning restraint, making friends, etc. The lessons feel very intertwined with the story and the main character’s growth.

I loved the details about the setting. The book takes place in New Orleans and carries with it the historical weight of the area.

This novel was published by Amulet Books on 05/10/2022 and is available on Amazon here.

TL;DR Star Rating: 4.5

Links for more information:


Marti Dumas’ Website

Galactic Starcruiser and Disney World 2022

Galactic Starcruiser! 

What we wish we knew prior to getting to the Halcyon Starcruiser

No reviews. No videos. No information. My partner and I wanted to have the full effect of the experience aboard the Halcon. However, we did miss a few elements by going in blind. The crew and cast don’t go into much detail about the ship itself, how the experience works, or how to interact with the storyline. You’re given access to the datapad app (Play Disney) and free reign of any of the limited unlocked and open spaces on the ship, including the gift shop, the bridge (unless it’s in use for a group experience), the Sublight Lounge, the Atrium (gathering area), the brig, the Crown of Corellia Dining Room, your cabin, several extra bathrooms outside of your cabin, and the climate simulator.

During lightsaber training, you will have access to the Lightsaber Training Pod and during the course of the storyline, you should be able to gain access to the engineer room and the cargo hold. With 100 cabins, during muster and any major plot points in the storyline when all passengers gather in the Atrium, it is crowded. There isn’t enough seating for everyone and when people are standing, those who are not as tall (like myself) cannot even see what’s going on at ‘eye level.’ After waiting so long just to check in (we had to watch their orienting video just like we were waiting in the queue for a ride in the parks) and get to our room, seeing that overcrowded Disneyfied room full of other passengers was even more disheartening than waiting in a line outside the building just to go through security.

I wish we had more information or explanations about how certain aspects of our room worked, such as how to put on the “do not disturb” sign as we didn’t feel the need for a room refresher halfway through a 2-night stay. We bumped into the cleaning crew the second day when we were stowing our lightsaber and droid purchases from the Batuu (Galaxy’s Edge) excursion and it broke the immersion and was an awkward encounter. Out of 100 rooms, they happened to be cleaning ours at the exact time we came back for a 10-minute break. Go figure!

We also couldn’t hear shipwide comms inside the cabin and wish we could have perhaps enabled this feature in our room through the D3-09 panel. There was no explanation for how to use D3-O9 either, other than the crew member telling us to “say hello” when we were first dropped off in our room. There was no ability to replay any of the interactions with D3-O9, including the important ones that a cabin member may miss because they’re not present. We missed fun interactive opportunities because we didn’t know they were available with D3-09 and sometimes one person in the cabin was interacting and the other person missed it and we couldn’t get D3-09 to replay that interaction.

It would have been handy to know what cast/characters looked like before boarding as several of the passengers were in full face makeup and awesome-looking outfits. Since passengers have no influence on the overarching storyline, and there are so few characters mingling with the passengers, I would have liked to know who was who. We weren’t sure if we were “from Seattle” when talking to other passengers from around the world or “from Hynestia” from my immersion cover story. We were also always referenced by our reservation name and not any name we might have been using during the voyage for any activities check-in.

The very first person I happened to talk to was a cast member (Sandro – a shy musician) as we waited for muster. I thought Sandro was just a well-immersed passenger and when he asked where I was from my response was, “I don’t know.” I couldn’t remember my planet’s name and I wasn’t sure if I was talking to another passenger. Granted, we had just waited an hour to enter the Starcruiser (boo lines) and get to our room. We’d been up since before 7AM to walk around Hollywood Studios that morning after spending all of the previous day at Epcot and traveling three time zones just two days prior.

Starcruiser Experience in detail

As I told D3-09 (the cabin droid), I was on the Starcruiser “for the food.” I absolutely loved the experience of the food. The presentation, the details, and the quality blew me away. Coming from the Greater Seattle area, I had lower expectations of the food but was altogether pleasantly surprised by almost everything we ate in all the parks, including at the Starcruiser. We did pay to try out a number of their exclusive and alcoholic beverages (not included in the all-inclusive price of the cruise). We tried out the espresso martini, Dagobah Vimlet, Mark of the Huntress, Hoth Icebreaker, and Poison Spitter).

As excited as we were for the unlimited blue and green milk, we were disappointed with the consistency. The ship’s green and blue milk dispensers were not up to the same standards as in Galaxy’s Edge. At one point the green milk came out warm. The Tip Yip (mac and cheese with chicken) was cold, but otherwise, I thought the food was amazing. We left early on our last day and missed out on breakfast. I wondered why it wasn’t offered during the entire checkout/departure time.

The attention to detail on the ship as well as the Halcyon to Batuu transport shuttle on day two were just as magical as the food. I absolutely loved the look of our cabin. It felt very immersive and though smaller than a regular hotel room, it didn’t feel claustrophobic or small for the two of us. We left our view screen on at all times and it was fairly bright. I do wish we could turn off the lights around the viewscreen while leaving it ‘open’ as the only options were on and open or closed and off. It was fantastic to wake up and see space outside our window each morning.

The only cramped feeling in our cabin was trying to pass in the hallway from the front door or bathroom area to the sleeping area. It was fun to try out the bunk beds and I loved the offset plugs next to the bed so I could plug in both bulky block chargers at the same time. I loved the look and feel of the Starcruiser. The one room that felt superfluous was the climate simulator. Out of very little square footage available for passengers to hang out, this rock cairn garden with plants was usually empty during our stay when we popped in for a respite. It would have been neat to have a hot tub in that room or to use it for the storyline at some point during our stay.

One of our favorite details in the Starcruiser was the Sabacc Holotable in the Sublight Lounge. Also, as guests of the Starcruiser, we were able to use the exclusive Galaxy’s Edge entryway and that did make me feel very special. The crew manning this access point was very friendly and accommodating. Where much of Galaxy’s Edge is in full sunlight, we were able to pop back over to this space whenever we wanted shade and complimentary water.

And how about that immersive element of the story and our experience? We liked what there was of them… But most of the story that you interact with is through your datapad. Of the few activities, I enjoyed the bridge ops training, lightsaber training, and the Sabacc tournament. Each of these activities still had some room for improvement. Bridge ops training was essentially an arcade-style multi-team 50-ish person exercise. You are on one of four teams where you defend the Halcyon and then rotate between the four teams to experience each of the activities for a few minutes in training and then in a simulated exercise. It was ultimately fun but some of the passengers had trouble understanding how to use the consoles or understanding how the console connected to the larger view screen during the simulation. There was a lot of noise and visual chaos as all four teams worked at the same time to complete the mission, which created a sense of community and built up the excitement.

Though we missed the initial Sabacc training due to overlapping scheduling of activities (one of the negatives), we spent time at the Sabacc Holotable and read through the list of rules included with the card set we bought. The Sabacc tournament was held twice and we participated in the second set of games (we didn’t win).

A top highlight of our experience was the actor who played Lt. Croy: Adam Reilly. Every time we saw him we were blown away by his performance. Fortunately, he was one of the characters who appeared more frequently. Lt. Croy carried the story and raised the experience rating at least one point – his dialogue felt much more believable and realistic and he had a lot more back-and-forth and on-the-fly dialogue.

The constant question in my head before, during, and after our Starcruise would be, “is it worth the $5000 price tag?” Is lightning lane bypass to Smuggler’s Run and Rise of the Resistance worth staying at the Galactic Starcruiser? Is staying in this exclusive and amazing ship worth the money? Is the all-inclusive resort-style food worth it?

The better question is can you afford that price tag and do you mind sharing the experience with 400 other people who can make the experience itself feel cramped, crowded, and not immersive? The Starcruiser is immersive up to a point, and not just through your mindset that you’re living in a science fiction reality for two days. Your reservation is under your real-world name and you check-in as that person for every dinner and activity. If you want to arrive at the ship in costume, you might spend 30 minutes standing outside in your outfit before you hit that sweet air conditioning. Roughly 50% of the passengers are dressed as people from a Star Wars-like reality while 50% of the passengers look like Earth tourists. On your Galaxy’s Edge excursion day you’re not supposed to dress in full garb and full-face makeup (per Disney World’s resort costume guidelines) though it seems this policy was relaxed for Starcruiser guests as we saw robes touching the ground by other passengers in Galaxy’s Edge.

As someone who wanted a vacation from my phone, I was most disappointed with the heavy reliance on the Datapad moving along the storyline rather than actual human or other interactions. I can play a game on my phone anytime, I don’t need to pay $5000 and play on my phone in a special hotel. A lot of this felt like an infodump. I wanted more showing and less telling! The app worked fine technically but it was a letdown to be reduced to interacting with the storyline using just the datapad app.

And if we wanted to pick sides then the app would stop the thread of the storyline instead of opening up different paths. It was frustrating to not be able to influence the story at all. What is being an active participant in the story, if not changing the outcome? The experience is not a choose your own adventure.

My second major disappointment with the Galactic Starcruiser was the number of people in the hotel. There was a substantial line to check into the cruiser. There was a long and slow-moving line to watch the orientation ‘loading’ video and ride the elevator/transport to first enter the hotel There were lines at consoles. There were lines to get into the engineering room. There were lines to talk with characters. We didn’t get to have any interactions with the main characters. We actually missed an interaction opportunity with Chewie due to overlapping activities. Every ‘personalized’ story thread was overcrowded every time so it was apparent that they weren’t personalized. We sometimes had to wait in lines 10+ to continue the storyline through these special events.

There was nearly a mob during muster and the finale to where I couldn’t see anything on the ground floor. I was surprised that there wasn’t a line to sit in the Sublight Lounge or to get to and from Galaxy’s Edge the second day.

The group activities were well spaced for the number of people in each activity (~50 in the bridge ops but everyone had their own station. 20-25 people in the lightsaber training but the instructor kept it lively and moving. Another related disappointment was the overlapping of activities because they needed to be able to get 400 people through each of the exclusive activities. Also, some of the optional activities to pass what little time you had open were capped at a small number of participants, which was frustrating. we were able to play Starcruiser bingo (called Sector Set) but were initially denied participation in a Get-To-Know-Your-Partner game as they only had game sets for four couples!

I didn’t think too much of the lightsaber training. It felt like it was designed for children since the technology wasn’t as responsive as I would have thought. You were supposed to activate the lightsaber and then ‘block’ the beam of light with the saber. You were in lines of 4-5 people and the person at the front was wielding the lightsaber. Once every person had participated for a few minutes we were then able to grab shields and help block escaping beams of light from the person with the lightsaber. The beams of light sped up at the end of training. And that’s it. Not much to it. A bit anticlimactic. No blindfolds were involved. My favorite part was the haptic feedback on the shields.

The cost for a family of four starts at $6000 and it felt like the activities on board were designed with kids in mind. There were about 20 kids on our cruise. Most of the passengers were adults, so why were so many activities geared towards children? Most of the special treatment, personalization, and character interactions also seemed to prioritize these few kids. Why would you bring a toddler on a $6000 experience? Even the consoles on each deck seemed oriented toward children’s interactions. The engineering room was for children (pull levers and push buttons when they light up). As an adult, it felt a bit weird to play this game with the crew member minding this room even with the go-with-it mindset I was employing.

We decided to pay for the add-on activities (and for $5000+ shouldn’t they be included?) to build a lightsaber, build a droid, and go to Oga’s Cantina. After the Sublight Lounge, it didn’t feel as necessary to visit the highly exclusive Oga’s Cantina in Galaxy’s Edge but part of the storyline continues at that location and we didn’t want to miss out. Plus, Fuzzy Tauntaun. It’s a must-try and we missed out on our first excursion to Galaxy’s Edge in California a few years ago because they didn’t have it at that time. The bartenders at Oga’s are also very entertaining and some of the best cast members in the parks. If you can snag a reservation (even when they open at 8AM  because it’s always 5 o’clock at Disney), it’s worth it to go. Building a droid, eh. Building a lightsaber is probably also worth the cost if you already want to buy one. It’s a fun 20-minute immersive activity (even with the infant screaming in the background at our build).

We sandwiched our Galactic Starcruiser voyage in-between visits to four of the Disney World parks: Epcot, Hollywood Studios, Animal Kingdom, and Magic Kingdom. Unlike the sparse prior knowledge and purposeful lack of research for Starcruiser, we went all out in preparation for our Disney World parks visit. We watched Disney World tips and planning videos from the Youtube channels All Ears with Molly and Disney Food Blog with AJ

  • I used the Disneyworld website to plan our park day hours and double-check late night/early entry hours Here.
  • I checked the wait times using this info website Here.
  • I pulled the map and planning info Here.
  • I looked at showtime info from this website Here.
  • We made a plan of which lightning lane to book first and our first 3-5 rides and the restaurants/snacks we might be getting in the morning
  • I created a spreadsheet for each park with early entry, late attractions, and rides with lightning lanes indicated. I also showed duration, location, average wait time, and any other notes if I needed to reference them later (like what type of ride or to stay away). You can download my spreadsheet and make your own edits Here.

We watched Disney movies associated with the park rides/entertainment starting with our favorites below:

  • Frozen
  • Finding Nemo
  • Ratatouille
  • It’s a Bug’s Life
  • Avatar
  • Haunted Mansion
  • Jungle Cruise
  • Monster’s Inc.

We bought specialized gear just for FL and the trip

  • Collapsible backpack – only used once for overflow of purchases – if you plan your shopping towards the end of your night or right before going back to your hotel to rest midday you don’t need an extra bag ($17)
  • Star Wars-themed park bag – This one had one strap for crossbody and that irritated my shoulders. Would not recommend a crossbody bag unless you keep it very light ($68)
  • Simple ponchos – It didn’t rain so we didn’t open them but they are almost always recommended for a WDW trip so you don’t have to buy an overpriced one in the park ($13)
  • Little expandable towel – Used once after Splash Mountain. Wasn’t necessary. I found two at the dollar store and they remained wrapped up and tight until we used them. ($2.50)
  • Individually wrapped painkillers – Didn’t use them at all but nice to know we had them available if needed ($9)
  • Travel bidet – One of the best travel bag items you can get! I highly recommend this one and to get a fixtured one for your house when not traveling ($33)
  • Newer, lighter power bank – We brought two and would swap between them every day since we only had so many charging cords ($40)
  • Foldable travel blanket – Didn’t even open this once. We contemplated opening it when we were sitting waiting for Harmonious in Epcot but the ground is unusually clean (thanks Disney!) ($36)
  • Hand sanitizer with Grogu on the cover – Highly recommend bringing your own little bottle even though there are stations everywhere. They dispensed a LOT of sanitizers and with our own, you can grab some before eating and in the correct quantity ($13)
  • Neck fan – Would recommend something that probably looks sillier but has better power and blows directly in your face. Ultimately this provided some relief but only directs the air to your neck ($30)
  • Water bottle with spray function – This is the greatest hot travel companion. I absolutely loved this misting feature. If you’re bringing a water bottle into the parks – bring this one! ($13)
  • Sun protecting hat – When you can’t avoid being in the sun – protect your head! I loved my orange bucket hat from Urban Outfitters but if you forget to bring one they sell lots of wider brimmed hats (and bucket hats) in the parks. ($25)
  • Shorts with lots of pockets and moisture-wicking features – I had almost given up on finding shorts/capris that were not too restrictive, didn’t push on my belly, and had functional pockets until I stumbled upon a lovely pair with zippered pockets all over and a built-in belt that came in handy. They were slightly loose but overall amazing and I wore them every day.
  • Travel steamer – Used once. It works really well and was handy for crisping out my Starcruiser outfit but probably not necessary to bring unless you really need to iron and you won’t have access to one (we didn’t own an iron before). ($40)
  • Phone battery charger case – I didn’t love this design since the ‘on’ button was incredibly easy to press accidentally but ultimately I only used the external battery charger once when I hadn’t charged up the battery case the night before. It helped out my iPhone 12 mini’s 88% battery health to last all day with the juice from the case. Highly recommend investing in one if you need to use your phone for 14-16 hours in a day ($35)
  • Smaller pocket-fitting wallet – I usually have a wallet phone case and since I had swapped for the battery charger case I needed a wallet to put my cards into even though I only needed my license since the Magic Bands we got were able to pay for almost anything in the parks. ($13)
  • An airtag to pack into our checked bag ($29)
  • A colorful strap to put around our generic black suitcase to visually recognize it on the baggage carousel


What I wish I brought/bought beforehand:

  • More sunscreen – we ran out on the last day! Make sure you have enough for reapplying throughout the day ($28)
  • The right charging cables – we had more of some and not enough of others for all our various devices ($22)
  • Magic Band – we bought some the first day in the parks. They really do make everything cooler and easier and worth the $20 – $30 investment now that they are not a complementary feature of Disney resorts.

20 Tips To Take to Heart:

  1. Ride your must rides earlier in the day if they are prone to breaking down (looking at you Test Track)
  2. Late-night hours have long lines and there are no lightning lanes so be prepared to wait 40-60 minutes for bigger rides during late night hours
  3. Use mobile ordering whenever possible
  4. Use your faster mobile device to book your first lightning lane of the day at 7AM (consistently my partner was able to snag LL for rides within 15 minutes of park opening while I was getting 60 minutes and we were both refreshing right at 7AM and hitting book immediately)
  5. If you want to ride an IAS (lightning lane not part of Genie+ like Seven Dwarfs Mine Train, Avatar Flight of Passage, Remy’s Ratatouille Adventure, or Rise of the Resistance) make sure to rope drop them or suck it up and pay the extra money. We were able to rope drop Remy’s and I would suggest it for that one if you can enter at the closer gate. I would recommend hopping into the Seven Dwarf’s line during the fireworks (15-20 minute line and we got to see the fireworks from the coaster). I would highly recommend just paying for Rise and Avatar as those are highly rope-dropped rides and you may be waiting 40 minutes as soon as the park opens due to the volume of people going that direction first.
  6. Have a plan but don’t stick to it if better opportunities present themselves
  7. Know where some seating and air-conditioning spots are throughout the parks (here’s to you Hall of the Presidents)
  8. Fiddle faddling will only get you so far (refreshing the Genie+ screen to see if earlier return times appear)
  9. Check the weather the night before and know if you’re going on a splash ride and add or take out supplies in your park bag accordingly to save on weight (ponchos, towels, extra clothes, etc)
  10. Check the night before your park reservation to see if one of those pesky hard to get reservations magically appears (we were able to move from a 3PM Skipper Canteen reservation to an 11:30 restaurant opening reservation the night before when the restaurant had been booked solid)
  11. You can either have a relaxing time and just do a few things or go early, hard, and fast and do almost everything. It’s tough to get everything done in one park without getting there early or paying extra (Genie+)
  12. If you don’t see your photo after the ride you can ask to find it from a cashier in the gift shop (for rides like Splash Mountain)
  13. Magic bands are magical but not necessary
  14. People will stop in front of you, walk like zombies, walk in groups that block the walkway, and let kids run around so be cautious
  15. Know where the photo spots are on rides before you get there so you are looking in the right direction and can get a seat in the picture view (Pirate’s of the Caribbean has one photo of the large boat and if you’re in the back you will barely be visible).
  16. If you’re park hopping with a large gap in between parks you can stack up your Lightning Lanes using the 2-hour rule (we did this when we hopped from Animal Kingdom to Magic Kingdom and by the time we got to Magic Kingdom that evening I had lightning lanes for Peter Pan’s Flight 7:45-8:45PM, Haunted Mansion 8:05PM – 9:05PM, and Big Thunder Mountain Railroad 8:35 – 9:35PM).
  17. Take screenshots of reservations and lightning lane bookings! If they disappear or the app glitches you’ll have proof to show a cast member
  18. Know average wait times before you go so you can decide on the spot whether the line is unusually long or not
  19. Drop a pin where you park your car so you can easily find it again on your way out
  20. You can tap into your lightning lane a few minutes early (but not 5!)

Step count in the parks: 110,599 steps total at 49.7 miles of walking equivalency
Disney Springs – 13,396 (5.9 miles walking equivalency)
Epcot – 25,364 (11.4 miles walking equivalency) – we also stayed at the Boardwalk Inn – walkable to the Epcot
Hollywood Studios and Starcruiser – 16,087 (7.3 miles walking equivalency)
Starcruiser and Galaxy’s Edge – 12,700 (6.0 miles walking equivalency)
Animal Kingdom and Magic Kingdom – 24,450 (10.9 miles walking equivalency)
Magic Kingdom and Disney Springs – 18,602 (8.2 miles walking equivalency)

Favorite drinks:
Blue/Green milk from Galaxy’s Edge in Hollywood Studios
3 Daughters Brewing Pink Lemonade Hard Cider from Cider House in Epcot

Favorite eats:
Cheeseburger pods with the veggie chips from Satu’li Canteen in Pandora of Animal Kingdom
Pepperjack Pretzel from Cheshire Café in Fantasyland of Magic Kingdom
Canadian Poutine from the Poutine stand in Disney Springs

Favorite desserts:
Ube Donut from Everglazed in Disney Springs
Anything from Les Halles Boulangerie-Patisserie in France at Epcot
Cookies and Cream cookie from Gideon’s Cookies in Disney Springs

Disney + Starcruiser full experience cost breakdown of monies spent (click to make bigger)

Book Review: Dragons of Frost and Fire by Susan Brown

Dragons of Frost and Fire by Susan Brown

A Fantasy Novel published by Susan Brown (05/23/15)


Kit is relentless in her search to find her mother. She KNOWS that her mother is still alive. She will do anything – brave the cold death-dealing wilderness of Alaska by herself – to find her mother. It’s been a year since her mother disappeared, but Kit won’t give up. The magical knife tells her that she still has time to save her mother, she just has to figure out what the small town of Silver Claw is hiding and how the secret of the town is related to her mother’s disappearance.


Magic, Sorcery, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Family, Small Town, Secrets, Dragons, Genetic Mutation, Alaska, Wilderness, Survival, Blizzard, Storm, Magical Object, Friendship

My Review:

Kit is a larger-than-life character. Her need to find her mother is so all consuming in her mind. She believes with all her being that her mother, even after a year lost in the Alaskan wilderness, is still alive. That amount of conviction blows my mind. Her passion and devotion to her search is very endearing. She cares so much about her family and her mother. I wanted her to succeed!

The mystery of Silver Claw kept drawing me in. As much as Kit, and I as the reader, wanted to like some of the townsfolk, the suspicion was ever present on the surface. What did the town do to Kit’s mother? What were they hiding about her disappearance? Why did her lab notes disappear? What did she find out? The mystery is well paced in this story and the clues were gradually revealed and well placed.

The fantasy elements didn’t play a major part in the plot of the story. A magical knife did help Kit and was evidence to the fact that her mother was still alive. The ending did contain quite the fantasy reveal. This book appealed to me quite a bit because it focused on the characters and the secret that Silver Claw kept hidden within its residents. This is a fantasy book for non-fantasy readers as well as fantasy readers.

This novel was published by Susan Brown on 05/23/2015 and is available on Amazon here.

TL;DR Star Rating: 4.75

Links for more information:

Susan Brown’s Website


Book Review: MORE (MORE Trilogy Book 1) by T. M. Franklin


MORE (MORE Trilogy Book 1) by T. M. Franklin

A Fantasy Novel published by The Writer’s Coffee Shop Publishing House (10/3/12)


Ava is failing physics. Her professor proposes a tutor at no cost to her and she jumps at the chance, since she needs to pass the class to keep her scholarship. She can’t afford tuition without the scholarship and spends enough time working to make up the difference anyways. Her tutor, Caleb Foster, seems to be everywhere in Ava’s life and she doesn’t much mind, other than that funny feeling she keeps getting that she’s being watched.


Supernatural, Paranormal, Race, Powers, Super Powers, Physics, College, Diner, Working, Romance, Drama, Humans, Protection, Fighting, Fleeing, Taking a Stand, Capture, Threat, Elimination

My Review:

The first half of this book was rather boring and I kept waiting for the action to pick up, which it did, with a fury. Suddenly Ava’s life was turned upside down and she was in constant fleeing mode.

Though the book was slow to get going, the ending was much more satisfying, but by that point I was ready to put the series down. The plot twists were too convenient, moving characters where they were needed in the narrative without proper placement within the plot. Characters like Lucy and Ava’s childhood friend were dropped off when Ava’s story took off. The plot just didn’t do it for me. The story wasn’t different enough from all those other “chosen one” novels and the paranormal aspect was not original either. I also didn’t feel like I ever really got to know Ava as a person before she was swept up into her supernatural character role.

This novel was published by The Writer’s Coffee Shop Publishing House on October 3rd, 2012 and is available on Amazon here.

TL;DR Star Rating: 3.25

Links for more information:

T.M. Franklin’s Website