Weekend Writing Warriors – Donuts in an Empty Field 5#WeWriWa

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Here’s the link to the Weekend Writing Warriors central page, so you can visit all the participants sharing excerpts!

Donuts in an Empty Field is a contemporary, realistic fiction, and Young Adult novel about two best friends, the local food challenge, and letting go of anger.

This excerpt is from chapter one.

After last week when Vanessa first opens the room to her late father’s office, she is tasked with cleaning everything out and boxing everything up with her mom and her best friend, Nichole. Mom dropped a plate in the kitchen, causing Vanessa to panic and get tangled up with Nichole in her attempts to get to her mom as fast as possible. Instead of something sinister, Vanessa finds her mother crying and goes to comfort her.

 

“It’s okay, Mom.”

I bend in to hug her and she turns to me with shaking shoulders, sniffling and blinking to stop her tears.

“It’ll get easier,” I tell her, patting her on the back.

“Grief is a funny thing. It’s never the same and it’s always a tough upward climb, but you’ll get there. It won’t be easy, but you’re strong and you’ll get through it,” Mom assures me, turning back into the parent.

Ugh. There’s the canned therapy talk. At least she’s feeling more like herself, even if I don’t.

 

Why does Vanessa have to comfort her mother when they both lost someone? Shouldn’t her mom comfort her? Vanessa is tired of the therapy talk and tells her mom that she and Nichole can handle the rest of the packing. Tune in next week to see what they find behind the torn picture!

 

Purchase the book HERE.

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Local young adult writer, Rachel Barnard, will release the first novel in her young adult For the Love of Donuts series titled Donuts in an Empty Field with Life’s a Book Publishing, June 3rd, 2016 (AKA National Donut Day). Order your copy HERE.

Letting go of anger is life’s greatest challenge.

Vanessa hasn’t been the same since her father’s death. A hero until the end, he died saving a restaurant owner’s son from a burning building. Nessa blames the boy, but her best friend Nichole thinks it’s time to let go of the past. In a last ditch effort to break Nessa’s obsession, Nichole hopes signing up for the local food challenge will bust her out of her shell. A single choice defines the road ahead for Nessa. Doing the right thing isn’t easy, but living with the consequences of doing nothing might be worse.

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Foodie Fridays: The Donut Debate Breakdown from the donut giveaway

Congrats to Jennifer Y on winning the Donuts giveaway!

55 unique donut entries (some entries have been combined into categories)

17+ different donut submissions

The winner with 13/55 votes is GLAZED!


Glazed – 13

Custard/Boston Crème/Bavarian Crème – 10

Chocolate – 7

Jelly – 4

Powdered – 4

Cruller – 3

Bacon Maple Bar – 2

Maple Bar – 2

Specialty cake (frosting/sprinkles) – 2

Apple fritter – 1

Cinnamon – 1

Lemon Blueberry – 1

Plain – 1

‘Fresh’ – 1

Vanilla Dip – 1

Toasted Coconut – 1

Spiced Cider – 1

Upcoming Local Event: Neverending Bookshop in Bothell, WA

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RSVP to the Meetup HERE or the Facebook HERE

 

Celebrate the release of For the Love of Donuts Book 1: Rachel Barnard will be there to sign books, especially the new Donuts in an Empty Field (For theLove of Donuts Book 1). Her other books, Ataxia and the Ravine of Lost Dreams, At One’s Beast, and Vanessa’s Book of Awesome Things will also be available.

Add the book to your Goodreads shelf:
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/30052109-donuts-in-an-empty-field

There’s a raffle: Free to enter. Drawing will take place towards the end of the event. Don’t miss out on the donut swag!

Vote on your favorite donut: It’s a blind tasting! Compare the same donut from several local donut shops and vote on your favorite!

Bring your used books and get store credit!

Got something cool to say about donuts? Don’t forget to add it to the “All about the Donuts” comment/quote box.

First five purchases after 3:00 P.M. will receive a FREE mini donuts swag pack.

After this event, drive down to Third Place Books for a dual author event with Rachel Barnard and Ksenia Anske here:
https://www.facebook.com/events/919472141499694/

Book Review: Ghost Hope (The PSS Chronicles #4) by Ripley Patton

Ghost Hope (The PSS Chronicles #4) by Ripley Patton

A Speculative Fiction/Paranormal Novel published by Ripley Patton (06/15/16)

Summary:

After everyone was displaced at the end of Ghost Heart, Olivia is with Mike Palmer stuck waiting for the hackers to find out where the dome and everyone else went. Mike Palmer leaves to find Kaylee. The hackers find the dome and Olivia is ready to go back because her goal is clear: get into the computers in the dome and find out everything the CAMFers and the Hold know about PSS, what they’ve been doing, and what they’ve done. Olivia doesn’t plan to stop at finding the research, however, she has bigger plans for the information.

Keywords:

Rare, Ghost Hand, Power, Hunted, Freak, Not Normal Teenagers, Hiding, PSS, Research, Friendship, Leader, Strategy, Romance, Love, Relatives, Plan, Reuniting, Lost, Dome, Desert, Oregon, Fighting, Human Nature

My Review:

What a wonderfully satisfying ending to this series! Everything I wanted to know and everything I didn’t realize I wanted to know was revealed throughout this final and fourth book. What is PSS, how does it work, and finally where did it come from are fully answered. As a series, Patton does an amazing job at revealing the perfect amount of information on her imaginative PSS concept at the perfect intervals. Everything came together in this final book.

Characters I thought were minor were given more depth. For instance, Anthony, was shown to have a bigger role in the overall plot and more significance to the story than just as Dr. Fineman’s henchman. Every character mattered. Every character was their own person. Even Anthony is not entirely evil as a bad guy. His motivations and why he thinks the way he does is shown. He even gets some of his own chapters!

The breakdown of POV in this book was masterfully crafted. There were multiple POV, but they didn’t always alternate every chapter. The reader gets inside the heads of everyone important, except perhaps Olivia’s mother. There’s David Marcus, Olivia, Anthony, Jason, Mike Palmer, and Kaylee to get to know better. Kaylee was the most unique and different voice. Even though I couldn’t get into her perspective as much as I could the others, she was the most interesting voice to read.

The climax was excellent in both this book and as a series finale. There was buildup of tension throughout, with action interspersed expertly with character development and scene. The ending was as tense as any thriller and the conclusion was perfect for the plot, even though I thought there could be more written for the denouement. Some of the character reactions to the climax were not as full as they could have been.

I look forward to reading whatever Ripley Patton writes next.

This novel was published by Ripley Patton on June 15th, 2016 and is available on Amazon here.

TL;DR Star Rating: 5.00

Links for more information:

Ripley Patton’s Website

Goodreads

Weekend Writing Warriors – Donuts in an Empty Field 4#WeWriWa

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Here’s the link to the Weekend Writing Warriors central page, so you can visit all the participants sharing excerpts!

Donuts in an Empty Field is a contemporary, realistic fiction, and Young Adult novel about two best friends, the local food challenge, and letting go of anger.

This excerpt is from chapter one.

After last week when Vanessa first opens the room to her late father’s office, she is tasked with cleaning everything out and boxing everything up with her mom and her best friend, Nichole. Vanessa’s mom just cried out from the other room and the girls dropped everything in their panic to make sure Mom is okay.

 

Nichole bumps into me in our haste to make sure Mom’s okay and we both fall to the floor. My world turns upside down and I bang my head against Nichole’s knee. I’m panting and scrambling to disentangle my limbs from Nichole’s. Mom still hasn’t answered.

We run out to see what happened. Mom’s in the kitchen, her hands braced on opposite sides of the sink. For a moment I’m immensely angry that she didn’t answer when I called, scaring the bejesus out of Nichole and me, but then I notice she’s crying. Shame at my anger crashes down on my shoulders.

 

Why is Vanessa’s mom upset? Tune in next week to find out.

 

Purchase the book HERE.

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Local young adult writer, Rachel Barnard, will release the first novel in her young adult For the Love of Donuts series titled Donuts in an Empty Field with Life’s a Book Publishing, June 3rd, 2016 (AKA National Donut Day). Order your copy HERE.

Letting go of anger is life’s greatest challenge.

Vanessa hasn’t been the same since her father’s death. A hero until the end, he died saving a restaurant owner’s son from a burning building. Nessa blames the boy, but her best friend Nichole thinks it’s time to let go of the past. In a last ditch effort to break Nessa’s obsession, Nichole hopes signing up for the local food challenge will bust her out of her shell. A single choice defines the road ahead for Nessa. Doing the right thing isn’t easy, but living with the consequences of doing nothing might be worse.

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Subscribe to Rachel’s newsletter to receive important updates and promotions, if you haven’t already. Signup HERE

Add the book to your Goodreads shelf HERE

All About the Donuts: Local Donut Shop Review – Sunrise Donuts – Redmond, WA

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Remond, WA

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7299 West Lake Sammamish Pkwy NE, Redmond, WA 98052

(425) 885-6112

Website: http://eatsunrisedonuts.com/

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Review criteria:

Most popular donut at the shop: Maple Bar and Apple Fritter
Signature shop donut: “a dozen”
Most popular US donut: glazed
2nd most popular US donut: Boston crème
Donut Hole: glazed/powdered/cinnamon/and cruller (a dozen for $2 and 3 for $1)

 

What I tried:

Maple Bar, Glazed, Donut Holes, Cruller bite, Boston Crème, jelly filled

 

What to expect:

Although the shop hours are from early in the morning until 2PM, if you show up too late they may have closed shop because they’ve sold out for the day. This place is popular and sometimes sales guys or businesses will buy out the inventory and you’ll lose out, so go early! They have cruller bites, which is neat and a cool addition to the donut hole. The shop is warm and inviting, though small in physical space. The plaza they are located in has enough parking and it’s not impossible to make a left hand turn out onto the street (there’s a nifty turn lane).

 

My favorite:

Normally I’m a fan of the boring old – yet delicious – glazed donut, but after I took one bite of the jelly filled I was converted. Sunrise Donuts makes such a fluffy dough that is thick but not heavy and is everything you wanted from a krispy kreme and more. The jelly filling is not too sweet and perfectly smooth and is very, very delicious and is my new favorite from Sunrise.

Upcoming Local Event: Maple Valley Days!

 

You can find FVP and some great books by local authors at Maple Valley Days near the info booth! This is our third year at Maple Valley Days and we have some new books since last year.

Check out our 2015 Maple Valley Days

Check out our 2014 Maple Valley Days

LAKE WILDERNESS PARK
23601 224th Ave SE
Maple Valley, WA 98038
 
FESTIVAL HOURS
Friday: 3pm – 8pm – Carnival  stays open until 10.
Saturday: 10am – 9pm
Sunday: 10am – 5pm
 
For more information, visit the official website HERE or visit the new Facebook page HERE

Book Review: Sweet Secrets by Stephanie Weippert

Sweet Secrets by Stephanie Weippert

A MG/YA/Fantasy Novel published by TANSTAAFL Press (02/27/16)

Summary:

“Well, a chef can make amazing things happen when they create things to eat. A Chef takes ordinary food that we eat every day and turns it extraordinary.” (from Sweet Secrets by Stephanie Weippert).

Michael was told not to touch the chocolates. What 7-year old would follow those instructions? After Michael eats the chocolate, he is transported to another world – one run by Chefs and the power of food. His step-father Brad must follow after and retrieve Michael from this new and magical realm with the help of next-door-neighbor William, who is, in fact a powerful Chef. Michael is handed off from one person to another in this realm until he lands at the powerful school called Cordon where they want to teach him to be a true Chef. But what about his mother? Will Michael leave everything behind to learn how to make cookies fly?

 

Keywords:

Food, Magic, Chef, Talent, Cooking, Baking, Dessert, Sweet, Otherworldly, 7-year old, Chase, Orphanage, Students, Tests, Home, Cooking School, Portal

My Review:

This novel is a teen and young adult book but contains POV switches between a 7-year old and his step-father. Because half the narrative takes place in the perspective of a child, this book should be middle grade, not young adult. Since the other half of the narrative is told from the point of view of an adult, the classification is harder to define. This book crosses genres.

The start of the story was slow and didn’t pick up until about a third of the way through. Even though there is an immediate action with Michael transporting to a new world, there wasn’t much tension. He was never in danger. There wasn’t much tension anywhere in the novel, mostly just a series of events. Some of the events were quite fascinating, such as any part that showed the true magic of this new world, but other scenes and parts dragged due to the over description and lack of focus. Many scenes and much dialogue did not move the plot forward.

The first main character, Michael, is 7 years old, but at times acts younger. Such as when he is quick to cry or unable to keep his hands off others’ things. At times, he acts older than his age, like when he says mature things and follows directions well. The other main character, Brad, did not act like an adult. His dialogue was juvenile and his character acted much like an excited and emotional teenager throughout.

Many of the Brad and William scenes were back and forth question and answer to explain the world and how Chefs worked. These were details that would have been better shown and not told. The scenes where the alphabet and numerals of the world were explained dragged as well and did not move the action forward.

I loved the imaginative uses of food, such as powdered sugar as a source of power and the way food is created to make things in this world, like cars. It’s a very logical imagination, though, and I had a lot of fun visualizing from all the food references.

This foodie-inspired world was fully fleshed out with levels to cooking skills and subtle references to our current world, such as Cordon being a top cooking school. I was very glad the Chef tests were shown in great detail and explained fully as they were the most interesting parts of the story!

The recurring theme of not being able to pronounce Michael’s name was quite funny.

This book was highly imaginative, but the plot and scenes lacked focus.

Disclaimer: I received a free ARC copy of this book from the author and this is an honest review.

This novel was published by TANSTAAFL Press on Feburary 27th, 2016 and is available on Amazon here.

TL;DR Star Rating: 2.75

Links for more information:

Twitter

Goodreads

Stephanie Weippert’s Website